I'm starting to see more growth in your series. I enjoy your unique perspectives of your images (E) and am starting to see more coherence between your pieces (A).
I love how you use the technique of creating this artwork (E) and is illustrated, but the voice is not that strong (H)
The first-person perspective is quite evocative (D). Voice could be stronger though (H).
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.